The Breakup

Shelved, the teapot slowly gathers dust.

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13 Responses to The Breakup

  1. Anonymous says:

    Nice use of end focus 🙂

  2. Mike says:

    Stale, brewed scent of friendship lost

    • jasonoruairc says:

      6 word reply! Thanks Mike.

      • Peter McCavana says:

        Yes, Jason, I think both you and Mike got it down to a tea!
        (;-)
        Here’s a suggestion for setting it to music:
        Just walk away, Renee,
        You won’t see me follow you back home.
        The empty teapot on my shelf is starting to go stale,
        It’s not the same

        • jasonoruairc says:

          Lovely lyrics Peter, I think that could work rightly.

          • Peter McCavana says:

            I presume (but maybe I shouldn’t presume) you know the original song (by the Four Tops) that I adapted?:

            Just walk away, Renee

            And when I see the sign that points one way
            The lot we used to pass by every day

            Just walk away, Renee
            You won’t see me follow you back home
            The empty sidewalks on my block are not the same
            You’re not to blame
            etc.

  3. eilishstocks says:

    Bag in a cup not the same.

  4. Anonymous says:

    Bags in a cup. Not the same.

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